Review Detail of ThreeMilks875 in Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Review detail
I’ve read up to chapter 67 (current chapter) and so far it has good English with good grammar as well as an interesting premise. Occasional POV changes that instead of getting in the way, actually contribute to world-building. It seems to be going at a good pace and I like the idea that he has his consciousness stats and his bodies stats, as well that the system and dungeon are separate and even seem to oppose each other in some circumstances. Up until the Orc area (plains) I was reluctant to leave a review as the only other interaction the MC had was with the Lich but during the Orc interactions it’s clear that the author has the ability to write interactions between characters that add to the story. Even during the Skeleton body chapters, the POV change to the branch master and others spice up the story enough to make up for the MC’s interactions.
Stuck as a Dungeon Mob
Pwnzer
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yo author is there ever gonna be romance/harem or just straight action?(would like to know if it's gonna be a harem so I don't waste my time reading lol love romance tho)
Pwnzer:I love how detailed your review is. if you ever find the change of pov to not add anything to the story just tell me and I'll try to fix it, it has happened before. Other than that, thanks for leaving a review. I'll try to maintain this quality in the future.
Never harem! Screw harems don't @ me! As for romance it's unlikely but I wouldn't write it off entirely. So far there has been virtually none of it though.
CrimsonPhoenix:yo author is there ever gonna be romance/harem or just straight action?(would like to know if it's gonna be a harem so I don't waste my time reading lol love romance tho)
Yeah **** harem it ruins story's tho even if it's a side thing romance it good cuz let's be honest who wants to be alone there lyfe
Pwnzer:Never harem! Screw harems don't @ me! As for romance it's unlikely but I wouldn't write it off entirely. So far there has been virtually none of it though.
anyways thx for reply always got to make sure I don't read a book for like 100 chapters then it's turns to a harem on me out of no where not worth the regret of reading the story lol
Pwnzer:Never harem! Screw harems don't @ me! As for romance it's unlikely but I wouldn't write it off entirely. So far there has been virtually none of it though.
Pwnzer started reading great so far but I saw one of ur replys to a comment and just remembered it lol u said something about if he escaped the dungeon to to human world it wouldnt be stuck as a dungeon mob anymore and the story would end BUT who says the world itself can't be a dungeon
Pwnzer:Never harem! Screw harems don't @ me! As for romance it's unlikely but I wouldn't write it off entirely. So far there has been virtually none of it though.
I said so end of story! ... ... Well there certainly isn't anything like that in my notes... unless!?!? Co- Could it be!?! Am I lying!? Well, I can guarantee there wasn't any consideration for that at the time the comment you are referring to was wrote. Also, I like the way you think. Maybe we are all in a dungeon and we are the monsters. Take it a step further, the dungeon is a metaphor for the fact that most of us will never be anything more than mobs in this planet with billions of people on it. Deep...?
CrimsonPhoenix:Pwnzer started reading great so far but I saw one of ur replys to a comment and just remembered it lol u said something about if he escaped the dungeon to to human world it wouldnt be stuck as a dungeon mob anymore and the story would end BUT who says the world itself can't be a dungeon