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Review Detail of Excavelier in The Ultimate Transmigration {Completed}

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Excavelier
ExcavelierLv33yrExcavelier

...........very fast paced and no story and character development the story is not too shabby itself but the grammars bruh overall the story sucks

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The Ultimate Transmigration {Completed}

SomeSpookyGuy

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SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

It’s a wish fulfilment. Did you not read the description? —_—

Excavelier
ExcavelierLv3Excavelier

i know, u know but for your first try its not that bad its just your grammar and character development

SomeSpookyGuy:It’s a wish fulfilment. Did you not read the description? —_—
SomeSpookyGuy
SomeSpookyGuyAuthorSomeSpookyGuy

Ill copy and paste what you are supposed to read. Ill just say this is a wish-fulfilment kind of fanfic. It’s absolute garbage, so if you don’t like it, just leave. I dont have time for hate comments or reviews. Really emphasise the ‘If you don’t like it, just leave’ part.

Excavelier:i know, u know but for your first try its not that bad its just your grammar and character development