...........very fast paced and no story and character development the story is not too shabby itself but the grammars bruh overall the story sucks
SomeSpookyGuy
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LIKEi know, u know but for your first try its not that bad its just your grammar and character development
SomeSpookyGuy:It’s a wish fulfilment. Did you not read the description? —_—
Ill copy and paste what you are supposed to read. Ill just say this is a wish-fulfilment kind of fanfic. It’s absolute garbage, so if you don’t like it, just leave. I dont have time for hate comments or reviews. Really emphasise the ‘If you don’t like it, just leave’ part.
Excavelier:i know, u know but for your first try its not that bad its just your grammar and character development