Review Detail of GodKingHuruu in God of Vampires

Your idea certainly hits me in the right spot, but after continuously pushing myself to read until it got better, I dropped it. The novel idea is good, but has no development at all, the MC used 4 hours to turn an entire village into vampires, understandable, but there could have been more detail in it, even the interaction with that village elder lasted one second, might as well have not even shown it, and also, after that, how is everyone fine with that, being turned into a vampire against their will, there wasn't even any confusion after it happened its like everyone just accepted it. Also, you didn't even explain anything about the castle, all you said was it looked magnificent, floats, has a lots of rooms, and has windows. Then the final turning point was when he said get ready for war or something, there was literally no checking on the army, no checking what they were invading, no details about the army conditions, and a lot more stuff. I know this story is probably just the author writing the stuff they want to write, and this could have been a fun read despite everything listed above if there was actually development in the story. Your story has potential though, keep working hard.