So. Im sorry to give this book such a rating, but heres why:
1. It is very rushed and quick, the mc could destroy an entire world in a few hundred words. Something like that could deserve more detail and words, it could also make the book better.
2. because of my first point, the world and character development suffers a bit, you dont get to know the enemies so well, and the mc could use some more introduction at the beginning.
3. the chapters are to short. the chaoters are always about 600-700 words. its not that big of a problem, but a bit longer wouldnt damage the book.
4. The story. I cant tell you how much i like the idea and the base of the story, but because of the points i made and some smaller mistakes, it isnt used to its full potential.
Now at the end i want to say, i havent read the book in its entiry and it may change in the chapters i have yet to read. i can also understand the „mistakes“, writing a book isnt that easy.
Still, great work author!