God of Vampires

i'm going to be shameful just this once and rate myself. i hope you love it. drop a review if you do! this is my first novel. i won't say my English is completely good but what i write is twisted and cunning evil.

So. Im sorry to give this book such a rating, but heres why: 1. It is very rushed and quick, the mc could destroy an entire world in a few hundred words. Something like that could deserve more detail and words, it could also make the book better. 2. because of my first point, the world and character development suffers a bit, you dont get to know the enemies so well, and the mc could use some more introduction at the beginning. 3. the chapters are to short. the chaoters are always about 600-700 words. its not that big of a problem, but a bit longer wouldnt damage the book. 4. The story. I cant tell you how much i like the idea and the base of the story, but because of the points i made and some smaller mistakes, it isnt used to its full potential. Now at the end i want to say, i havent read the book in its entiry and it may change in the chapters i have yet to read. i can also understand the „mistakes“, writing a book isnt that easy. Still, great work author!

this novel is definitely garbage you could see this the moment mc got the system and creation ability. he got a ability that can create anything he imagines as probably anyone reading thought this can make the mc OP. Which is not bad if the creation ability has a limit there was this one comment that said why not make a dragon and people who hear/see it become slave to mc. which makes this story pointless there is no need for him to do anything. anyways this is not the only thing characters dont have life in them they are bland and poorly writen maybe the novel got many chapters but the chapters are all under 1k so they are slow i dont recommend this to read even if you got nothing to read.

The story is bland because you know Mc is never going to lose. It has a really good concept but it is too fast and mc is invincible. He can literally do anything he can imagine. The system should be more of a reward system, like certain accomplishments give him perks/abilities.

Great concept but that's the only great thing about it, everything else is mediocre. 👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹👹 👺👺👺👺👺

This story has: Crappy character design, intresting story development unstable slow updates, well enough world background. Racist main character..........

Reveal spoiler

Writing quality is good. The update stability is pretty good. The story is developing and progressing at a reasonable pace and the character design is relatively ok except the mc goes insane on small things. The world background is great because it sucks you in and makes you feel as though you're there in the midst of all the action and world-building that takes place throughout the story. So overall its a pretty good novel as of the latest chapter.

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novel had potential but that ends real quick. it's just not going anywhere. jumps from one thing to another with no explanation of what's going on. really no point to this novel

The world and character building is not the worst I’ve seen but it’s still bad. Story lines are left incomplete and fast tracked to the next. There is no structure to this after the first few chapters. Story’s are left untold ppl introduced by others but never seen. I was really expectant and hoping something good would come of this but unfortunately not. The only good thing is that they’re minimal grammatical errors but they are still some. Which I don’t mind. But everything else 🤦🏾‍♂️

Its really amazing but i feel like you ( author ) could have done a bit more with the world background but other then that i really enjoy reading this book. 😃

Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!Really entretaining!

Can you please make more chapter's it's interesting but you update to slow so I can't enjoy it so please update it 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

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keep it up, and don't or else i'll hang you up and open a discord so we can help you out with ideas to get this novel somewhere. ............................................................................................. mm............................................................................................................................

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I really enjoyed this read, it's an interesting wish fulfillment story. By chapter 10 it is still enjoyable, since the protagonist starts out a literal god it will be interesting how the author spins this narrative to keep the reader interested.

Great work author! I mean the novel is interesting. In my perspective, I love the character's design, A strong protagonist huh, well, it's perfect for my taste. Grammar is good, you are quite explicit in the details, and ya, I like it! That's all I can say, for now, keep up the good work author! I'll be stay tuned for the next chapter.