Review Detail of INDOMITABLE in God of Vampires

The world and character building is not the worst I’ve seen but it’s still bad. Story lines are left incomplete and fast tracked to the next. There is no structure to this after the first few chapters. Story’s are left untold ppl introduced by others but never seen. I was really expectant and hoping something good would come of this but unfortunately not. The only good thing is that they’re minimal grammatical errors but they are still some. Which I don’t mind. But everything else 🤦🏾‍♂️