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Milo3008
Milo3008Lv133yr
2021-12-01 07:05

To be completly honest, I had problems keeping up with the story: to many perspective changes, too much info dump and a lot of different caracters in different places. If you combine these with the fact that the text is so compact that it looks like you are reading a brick... Well, my brain got a little ovewhelmed we could say... Ps: I do not Intend to hate this fanfic, and I haven't read to much (just like 30 chapters) so I don't know if it gets better afterwords. So do not take these words as a discouragement for reading this book.

Seven Deadly Sins transported to MHA

TrueCulture_io123
4.3
84 Chs

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TrueCulture_io123
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I appteciate it honestly. I agree that my writing style back then wasn't good in the least and for later chapters, I have tried improving my writing style but in my opinion it still isn't my desired writing style yet. I will see to it soon to rewrite the previous chapters and correct all the mistakes in them, make them more readable and better in general but thanks for the feedback

3yr
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cianr
cianrLv2

I think this is a great story, but one thing you can do to get more people to read your story is have more tags, stuff like #sevendeadlysins Hope this helps you, again i love your novel and i think you should keep up your hard work author

4yr

NotEyptiandio
NotEyptiandioLv5

Its pretty good not gonna lie. But there's still somethings that irritates me, I don't know what it is.

4yr
Newnoob
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cosmik
cosmikLv15

I WANT MOREEEEE GoodgoodgoodogoodhoodgoodhoodohoodogofododofejhsicpwkrhejwosocoeptkgodosoeorkfjsnqlqppqwpriritiejfnxbsjsAnajpqpwprppfpdpsoerdbehrvtvrhejdocovjznzmzmzkzmzmswpwppro

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balletangel19
balletangel19Lv2

Does Meliodas have his scared treasure Lostvayne with him? He needs it to create the clones. I haven't noticed it being mentioned. Anyway, great chapter.

4yr
balletangel19
balletangel19Lv2

I'm really enjoying this story. Although I've never really watched MHA and know almost nothing about it, I really love TSDS and love this little "modern" twist for them. Can't wait for the next chapter.

4yr
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Centipedes
CentipedesLv1

^V^ This is a really good story! Keep up the good work!! .

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