Review Detail of chiiiii in New Age Of Summoners

The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar. That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.