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Stilted_Cheese
Stilted_CheeseLv113yr
2021-10-05 21:48

I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.

New Age Of Summoners

vinayraj
4.5
1969 Chs

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Jeremy_Poon
Jeremy_PoonLv5

Where can I read about Steve the army soldier worm?

2yr
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B_DRAG
B_DRAGLv14

Jeremy_Poon:Where can I read about Steve the army soldier worm?
1yr
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Richard_Smith_0588
Richard_Smith_0588Lv14

I totally love this book. It's well worth the money spent on it. 5⭐'s in my eyes for all categories. As the character develo** so do the plot twists. The chapter cliffhangers are intense and leave you wishing for the next release

4yr

Darren_Davidson
Darren_DavidsonLv15

It's a really interesting novel plenty of action and character building a would love if the author got in contact with and artist and turn this into a comic.

4yr
vinayraj
vinayrajAuthor

Revised review of the author:- - Some grammatical mistakes here and there in the initial chapters; however, as long as you don't mind those mistake, I will guarantee regarding the story. - It's going to be a long book. So, be prepared for it. - No harem - Many elemental spirits and spirit beasts - New worlds - Overpowered mc with hidden powerful enemies. Hmm...that's it. I hope you enjoy reading it. If you have any more doubts, you can ask me below this reply. Thanks for reading my books.

3yr
kwame25
kwame25Lv12

not really worth all the hype its been getting. novel is ok`ish chapter length is very small compared to other novels and a lot of the chapters, have repeating information or shows the status info that take up a lot of word count...

3yr
Pavan_Swarup
Pavan_SwarupLv1

The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale. Now for the not so good bit: The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying. Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”. The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move. The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.

3yr
Bojuwoye_Ayoola
Bojuwoye_AyoolaLv3

What more could one possibly ask for?This is the type of book i would want to read during my free time. Basically,it serves it main purpose (it's not complicated and its easy to read). I'm rating this book five cos I really don't see a major flaw. Thumbs up 👍

4yr
TSL_Bakemono
TSL_BakemonoLv4

Some of the chapters are hard to read.. Just a little bit better than machine translations.. Well I dont mind the author asking the readers for grammatical help, but If you want to win that spirity award or what the hell that award is. You need a proofreader and editor.. This Novel is good.. I'll just come back when everything is fixed.. Work harder Author-san.. If someone wants to know what I feel as I read through the chapters.. Listen to DUALITY.. Sigh* I would've loved this novel right now, but-Sigh*

4yr
Erwan
ErwanLv11

i really enjoy this one and i hope to read more chapter rallye soon. Keep create and we'll keep support this novel. the main character seem a bit overpowered but it's really cool

4yr
Nathan_Spoehr_1405
Nathan_Spoehr_1405Lv1

The story is great but it is difficult to read because of the grammar errors which makes it hard to actually enjoy the story.

4yr
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