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Stilted_Cheese
Stilted_CheeseLv113yr
2021-10-05 21:48

I really tried to enjoy this story but after 50 chapters I can confidently say it's not worth your time. The grammar is not great but I've read enough web novels to be numb to it at this point. The system messages are overly repetitive, and constantly bombard you with 'ding'. The MC is genuinely the dumbest I've ever read. He is incredibly 'lucky' and his plot armor is so thick it would be more accurate to call it a plot nuclear bunker. The author introduces a McGuffin only to resolve it half a chapter later. In one case the system gives a quest to tame a lightening spirit hawk, immediately after an injured lightening spirit hawk lands directly at his feet. This sort of 'plot' development happens every chapter. When I was 5 years old I wrote a story for my grandma about a worm called Steve who was an army soldier. It had more character development than this novel.

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Jeremy_Poon
Jeremy_PoonLv5

Where can I read about Steve the army soldier worm?

B_DRAG
B_DRAGLv14

Jeremy_Poon:Where can I read about Steve the army soldier worm?
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