Review Detail of The_Bored_Immortal in All Your Fault!!!!
Review detail
At first it was all good but then author tried to force drama with th mc 'losing' his healing factor when he got an injury and couldn't recover for 2 months. Of course people pointed that out but the author decided that instead of stopping the anecery drama he would counter with calling anyone who pointed out logic retards.
All Your Fault!!!!
Kash_108
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That’s why you’re misinformed. You can’t write a review based off something other people have said, that makes zero sense. Pay attention to my chapters and you’d enjoy the novel more.
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Yeh and his power is to continuesly evolve his body. And for you to understand here is an example he fought the justice league, lifted a bus with one hand,also he was trained in martial arts by Ras' ghul but of course for the drama he lost against killer croc.
Demonzor:So basically mc is a downgraded version of Batman with powers
The character is much more complex than that. Stop taking everything at face value. Also his sense of humor is amazing.
Demonzor:He basically is but he has a sense of humor even though it’s terrible
Demonzor:He basically is but he has a sense of humor even though it’s terrible
Kash_108:Also if you knew some of the stuff I had planned for later you’d probably love the story.
The fact that he’s not some edgy, womanizer, who’s good at everything. He’s a character with internal conflict, who makes mistakes. That’s what’d you’d call a fleshed out character. I know that many fics on this site are low quality, but my partner and I wanted to make something of higher quality than the rest. Our story is much different compared to other fics and I’m assuming that many of you don’t like that, but at least have a very small understanding of the story before slandering it. If you don’t understand something I will explain what I’m trying to do or portray. However if you call my story crap or say it’s low quality simply because of your low comprehension skills, I will be aggressive. This is the one time I’m trying to be nice to you haters and hope from my explanation you can gain a semblance of understanding. If not do not say anything, do not spread any negativity and take your smooth-brained selves elsewhere.
Demonzor:I don’t see what’s so complex about him
Kash_108:The fact that he’s not some edgy, womanizer, who’s good at everything. He’s a character with internal conflict, who makes mistakes. That’s what’d you’d call a fleshed out character. I know that many fics on this site are low quality, but my partner and I wanted to make something of higher quality than the rest. Our story is much different compared to other fics and I’m assuming that many of you don’t like that, but at least have a very small understanding of the story before slandering it. If you don’t understand something I will explain what I’m trying to do or portray. However if you call my story crap or say it’s low quality simply because of your low comprehension skills, I will be aggressive. This is the one time I’m trying to be nice to you haters and hope from my explanation you can gain a semblance of understanding. If not do not say anything, do not spread any negativity and take your smooth-brained selves elsewhere.
I am kinda trying to more so push the similarities between him and his father. Reasons being it would make for great internal conflict. Also if my paragraph doesn’t apply to you don’t worry about it. I don’t target people for zero reason and I apologize if I offended you. Also what similarities do you see between Batman and the Mc?
Demonzor:I didn’t say your story is crap I only said he feels like a downgraded Batman to me
I’m mainly talking about his fighting style but know that I thought about it it’s more similar to Saiyan with how he can get stronger from fighting
Kash_108:I am kinda trying to more so push the similarities between him and his father. Reasons being it would make for great internal conflict. Also if my paragraph doesn’t apply to you don’t worry about it. I don’t target people for zero reason and I apologize if I offended you. Also what similarities do you see between Batman and the Mc?
Demonzor:So basically mc is a downgraded version of Batman with powers
The_Bored_Immortal:Yeh and his power is to continuesly evolve his body. And for you to understand here is an example he fought the justice league, lifted a bus with one hand,also he was trained in martial arts by Ras' ghul but of course for the drama he lost against killer croc.
Bro, your personality is awful so why would people like your story? 😂😂😂 And besides I say my characters aren’t dry, but they are to others. Youd obviously be biased to your own story, lmfaooo 😂😂😂🤡🤡🤡😳😳😂😂
Kash_108:The fact that he’s not some edgy, womanizer, who’s good at everything. He’s a character with internal conflict, who makes mistakes. That’s what’d you’d call a fleshed out character. I know that many fics on this site are low quality, but my partner and I wanted to make something of higher quality than the rest. Our story is much different compared to other fics and I’m assuming that many of you don’t like that, but at least have a very small understanding of the story before slandering it. If you don’t understand something I will explain what I’m trying to do or portray. However if you call my story crap or say it’s low quality simply because of your low comprehension skills, I will be aggressive. This is the one time I’m trying to be nice to you haters and hope from my explanation you can gain a semblance of understanding. If not do not say anything, do not spread any negativity and take your smooth-brained selves elsewhere.
Bro, your personality is awful so why would people like your story? 😂😂😂 And besides I say my characters aren’t dry, but they are to others. Youd obviously be biased to your own story, lmfaooo 😂😂😂🤡🤡🤡😳😳😂😂🖤
Kash_108:The fact that he’s not some edgy, womanizer, who’s good at everything. He’s a character with internal conflict, who makes mistakes. That’s what’d you’d call a fleshed out character. I know that many fics on this site are low quality, but my partner and I wanted to make something of higher quality than the rest. Our story is much different compared to other fics and I’m assuming that many of you don’t like that, but at least have a very small understanding of the story before slandering it. If you don’t understand something I will explain what I’m trying to do or portray. However if you call my story crap or say it’s low quality simply because of your low comprehension skills, I will be aggressive. This is the one time I’m trying to be nice to you haters and hope from my explanation you can gain a semblance of understanding. If not do not say anything, do not spread any negativity and take your smooth-brained selves elsewhere.
IPreferLonerMc:Bro, your personality is awful so why would people like your story? 😂😂😂 And besides I say my characters aren’t dry, but they are to others. Youd obviously be biased to your own story, lmfaooo 😂😂😂🤡🤡🤡😳😳😂😂🖤