This is a eastern fantasy story from a beginner author. That's the short review. And now for the slightly longer one: The story has an interesting premise. It's basically about a male and a female cultivator couple. Both are loners, have an op background and try to reach the apex. Most stories like this choose a only one primary weapon or cultivation path for their protagonist. From my current understanding this won't be the case here, especially considering the race he has chosen. As a new author there are obviously problems that can occur in both writing quality and storytelling. But ChaoticLuck is a person who likes to discuss, is willing to learn and improves after he thought things through. Within the first 20 chapters the improvement were huge. You won't be able to see it anymore since the old chapters got reworked. I'm looking forward to where our journey will lead us.
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