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Kasukage
KasukageLv134yr
2020-06-27 21:26

I really like this story. Nice setting, good background, no harem, and even the classic usage of rebirth, but it has my pet peeves in it unfortunately which makes met unable to read it. You repeat so much information. You constantly use a word that has already been confirmed to describe him and I really can't get into that. So I apologise, but I can't read any further until that is fixed. Keep up with the good work on everything else though, it was nice.

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Chaos_Prime
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Mhm No problem I’ll try and fix that as fast as possible. Till what chapter have u reached so I know from where to start fixing. I think I stopped doing that later on that’s why I wanna make sure. Thx for the comment it helps

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