Review Detail of savvypenguin in Adam Immortal: Dungeons of Dogmaorok

Of course I am going to give myself five stars, but more importantly, I want to give a tidbit on the story. It is dark, and gets darker as time goes in. People will die, and even the main character is not safe. This may start off as a weird and seem like a spoiler but its not. Dungeons should feel real, and have real stakes. They are not to be taken lightly, so I want to try my best to make it feel real, and make each detail feel plausible. This isn't the same main character gets Op story story, this is simply the story of a boy who had been given the short end of the stick and will do what he cant to change it. Also the first few chapter may not be written the best, but after the contest is over I will put vastly more effort into it.