Review Detail of SaxonViolence in Death system

EE…This isn't a bad story. Having said that, the first few chapters were exceptionally tedious to me. Some others were praising the story, so that might just be my idiosyncratic point of view. I almost gave up on the story about chapter 10 0r 15—don't remember. I hung in there and it got better eventually. The Protagonist Zuyuan dies and is offered an opportunity to stay alive by joining an enigmatic organization. Yeah, I'm pretty sure that he'd working for the Minions of EVIL. Not 100% certain—just 97.2% certain. I'll continue to read for awhile. Author, if you read this: IF you want to include gibberish to give a little of the flavor of foreign languages being spoken, well and good. It is a bit heavy-handed to write, "&&*%%$##y!" and then translate "Weiner Cleaner" EACH AND EVERY TIME! If you're going to translate, then omit the Lettish. Also, both your gibberish and your Tolkien-like Elfin runes bear too much resemblance to American Words or Letters. Once Again, I find this extraordinarily distracting.