Review Detail of MiszYumi in Death system

First of all, i must say, First line is OP and it got me hooked making me ask myself the same question. First chapter is superb and it got me reading and I thought the author improved a lot. Second point is the 2nd chapter I saw some/few grammatical error but its fine, I read through it and here comes the 3rd chapter and here is where im at rn. I tried to mark the errors/mistakes ive seen to try and help our author gain more readers ;) I give first chapter top marks, very interesting and captivating. Keep it up and dont stop in the middle. I believe in you ;)