First of all, this author puts alot of effort into writing his chapters, however.. the grammar and such were pretty bad, but the worst of all, the mc has been made to be a cringe little turd who speaks like a 13 year old child.. most of the mc's dialogue contains things like this 'I WILL KILL ALL DRAGONS AND SLIMES HEHE' It is very sad as the author had a good idea but made the mc a cringe little 13 year old turd, who most likely will make terrible decisions and not use logic.. what really suprised me though is that this authors other novel 'Killer of Mcs' is somewhat decent.. the mc is normal.. the dialogue seems normal and overall it looks decent, so author i ask you, why did you decide to $hit out this moron of a mc for this amazing idea of a novel?
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You know what character development is right? . . The mc is in that phase ,so shut the **** up and stop whinning like a pussy.
You know what is enjoyable character development? This novel is not it. The MC is major turnoff for reading past 10th chapter. He is so bad, it's just impossible to read.
Usually the grammar is fine though, not perfect, but good enough. But it was mighty funky this chapter. Maybe cuz it is new.
Pfff si es el personaje va madurando conforme pasa el tiempo
Look at it now. Patience, you don't.
Dude so you gonna act like dude didn't die a handful of times does the first 2 chapters painfully and last one he died slowly in a pond like dude don't act like you would've acted like some gigs chad
he is right there is a limit to the tolerance a person can take. your mc is like a standard Chinese 1 dimensional character. the first impression he leaves is good enough reason not to warrant wasting more time just to hope for batter character development in future chapters.
