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XxErnestoxX
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BE WARNED AUTHOR is deleting everything below 4 or 3.5 stars. This story is so bad dont waste your time and money. It was supposed to be a vrmmo game story but now unnecessary mystery and romance drama.

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The King's Mandate: Anomalous System

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CalistormX
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If you can explain how it is bad rather than just saying it is bad due to addition of some extra genres, extra genres can make story interesting or it may break it, if you can elaborate it will be helpful.

XxErnestoxX
XxErnestoxXLv15XxErnestoxX

First of all the title was about vr gaming some thing like *playing vr game with my grilfriend* when I read the story the first 70 chapters I think focused on vr gaming and adventure. The author promised at the beginning a harem that build over time and make sense. I felt weird not seeing him playing vr anymore and focus on his mysterious identity and there was no development with the girls until he became king. That’s where I dropped. The story is to inconsistent and has no flow.

CalistormX:If you can explain how it is bad rather than just saying it is bad due to addition of some extra genres, extra genres can make story interesting or it may break it, if you can elaborate it will be helpful.
CalistormX
CalistormXLv6CalistormX

Ah, I see, thanks

XxErnestoxX:First of all the title was about vr gaming some thing like *playing vr game with my grilfriend* when I read the story the first 70 chapters I think focused on vr gaming and adventure. The author promised at the beginning a harem that build over time and make sense. I felt weird not seeing him playing vr anymore and focus on his mysterious identity and there was no development with the girls until he became king. That’s where I dropped. The story is to inconsistent and has no flow.