Item: Fate's Little Feral Consort
Rating: 1.8
Author: lonely_snow

lonely_snowLv104yr

2020-08-12 00:20

So, the reason for the low rating ;- 1. Lets talk about the character design based on 30+ chapters, idk but i get the feeling that author don't really spend more time for details...its too typical and not to mention that its too predictable. Its a common pattern. 2. The translation quality is tbh below average (i mean not bad but okay but not up to standard, do you understand what i mean?)...i don't think that this translation do the story justice at all...i'm sorry translator.....but its the truth as i get the 'childish'(?) feeling from the translation(idk if its just me)...Put more effort *Fighting!* 3. The world design is like bold 'TYPICAL'....its not a new concept/theme....the same template used by Female MC's novel authors....i guess a long time reading and i get tired/bored reading this kind of repetitive concept...a constant cycle of 'assasin @ doctor @ whatever godly being u are' female MC

Fate's Little Feral Consort

Yu Xiaotong

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