webnovel
NewbiMainAccount
NewbiMainAccountLv64yr
2020-05-15 16:10

Pretty Gay but fun l,l,l,l,l,l,l,eld,led,eld,le,dle,dle,dle,dle,dle,dle,dled,el,dled,led,led,led,led,ledled,ed,eld,le,dled,led,el,deld,eld,eld,le,del,dle,dle,deld,eld,eld,led,el,dled,led,led,le,dle,dled,ledeld,eldledel,dled,ledled,eld,le

Liked it!

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
xXPlagueXx
xXPlagueXxAuthor

An actual review from the author with no favors. Writing Quality: 4/5 - It's pretty decent, although typos and some weird phrases of cringey Japanese weebslang is there, if we talk about normal, readable, smooth and way the story is told, it'd get a 3. Not 4 because the PoV is only 1st person, it's great for a novel about a solo character but when companions are introduced, 1st person becomes absolutely negative. Also, despite the decent readable grammar there are moments where the use of (,) are incorrect. The main reason for 3 stars is the unusual way of thinking the MC has, it's fine that he keeps it to himself but it gets pretty annoying sometimes. Stability of Updates: 2/5 - The story is super unstable, the author himself is stuck in between his hobbies and writing for fun to the point that the chapters are erratic, but he does manage to get out a chapter or 2 in a week. If I didn't know that I am the author, I would bet that this was in the verge of being dropped. But it's not, don't sweat balls. Story Development: 3/5 - It's a multiverse travelling story but so far, because of the author's ridiculous updates, the story is still in the world of DxD, but the way it goes through is very slow, he started a few years prior canon and even at the current chaps, he's not even meeting with Rias and Co. Yet. He has quest that orders him to rule over DxD Plot Center Kuoh Academy and so far, he's showing that he isn't bothered by how much problems that can cause. MC is either too confident or that fact went pass his 50 Intelligence head. Since the story is only at 20+ chaps, this can change but with his update speed, he'd probably leave DxD when humanity has been already wiped out by Covid. Character Design: 5/5 - We talking about the MC? Then he's probably the only trap mc with the mind to use both feminine side and masculine side to his advantage, he's a Hideyoshi by sex, and despite choosing it himself, he does complain quite a bit about it, just like Hideyoshi himself in BakaTest. He seems to have a peculiar hatred for boobs and a very emo past but he actually just shrugs it away, normally this would seem like lazy char development but it's only at 20+ chapters, talking about development at this point is like saying a horse would trip over and die when the race hasn't even begun. So far, he shows an attitude that an aware weeb would have, minus the lack of emotions in killing. World Background: 4/5 - So far since he's traveling already explained worlds, 5 star is Impossible, however, the story does take a little bit of time to explain stuff like that Cleria thingy or just how he explains certain stuff in DxD, this part of the review is usually always 3 star unless you're reviewing a novel instead of a fanfic. Overall: 3/5 - Decent writing, decent MC so far, decent details. And that's it because the lack of updates and the annoyingness of the trap mc is too much, he's like this super know it all weeb, though he does probably know it all, if we talk about the world's he's going to.

Related Stories

Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice

Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life. Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards. He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works! "I will save them all!" However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise. It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines? Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée. Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him. Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him. The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises. Something was wrong here! Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others... They like him! All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists. Grayfia even betrayed her husband. Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded. At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ... His inner voice! - The plot that has been changed by the MC: To Love Ru: 83% Highschool DxD: 82% Shinmai Maou no Testament: 92% Oregairu: 89% Saekano: 84% Oshi no Ko: 100% Rascal Does Not Dream Of Bunny Girl Senpai: 100% Mieruko-chan: 89% Trinity Seven: 38% This is the plot change process of the latest chapter and will change as the story progresses. By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character. Oh and in chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem. - Get the latest chapters faster on my patreon. Support me on patreon to keep me motivated to write more chapters: www.patreon.com/DogLicker

DogLickerGods · Anime & Comics
4.7
500 Chs