The story is engaging. The quality of the writing is also very neat although there are a few errors in the use of punctuation. The story development is also very well written. I really enjoyed this story. Overall impressive! Keep it up!
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LIKEMel_Aniv:Hello 👋 I am back after 4 years. I really needed your support on my latest novel "Murim Founder of 7 Martial Paths" Please add it to your colls and also read. I improved a lot over the years. This is just me hoping 🙏, I hope to have your understanding 😔