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Review Detail of Neatio in Lumia: Other World

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Neatio
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I have to say, the title of the chapter gives that initial feeling that something will happen. And for a while, you're held in suspense wondering how and what will happen. In essence, what I'm saying is that the writer pays off this expectation well, and also makes the reader confront a very sudden shift in setting early on in the story. All in all, it's a wonderful story so far, and I shall enjoy it as I continue to read on.

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Lumia: Other World

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Neatio
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No need to thank me when it's well earned.

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Thanks! I will make my novel better by starting from scratch again! Just remastering the chapter one made that kind of experience.[img=recommend]

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