The system is standard, characters were well written, may be a little to much explaining and the chapters were quite short. Overall it smelled the scent of a new author , who tries hard..... keep up the good work.
Mel_Aniv
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Thanks! What is yours again?
https://m.webnovel.com/book/omega-the-first-swordsman_18988270605847505 here's the link
Please vote my new work The Grandmaster's Rebirth okay? If you have something to spare.........I am in dire need of votes for the contest.