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le_shounenboi
le_shounenboiLv14yr
2021-01-24 15:02

This story is very interesting and it got me hooked up instantly. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it. The author did a great job in describing scenarios. All in all, the author did a great job, and looking forward to reading more.

Lumia: Other World

Mel_Aniv
4.9
225 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

Thanks a lot for the review!

4yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

I know this is shameless but I want to ask for your support for the last time. I joined WPC and badly needed votes. The title was "Amnesia Of Genius Copycat" Please if you have spare stones 🙏 It was a Zombie novel by the way 😔

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

Hello 👋 I am back after 4 years. I really needed your support on my latest novel "Murim Founder of 7 Martial Paths" Please add it to your colls and also read. I improved a lot over the years. This is just me hoping 🙏, I hope to have your understanding 😔

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

Hello! The author here! I am currently editng my work from scratch so there will be delays on my release. Remastering and revising my work with the help of my editor and proofreader. I will improve my writings and may you bear with me. That's all.

4yr

RaSi
RaSiLv2

Planning and plotting of story is good. Author has invested a lot of time and effort. Story comes out to be good a read. Would expect author to release more chapters. Grammar is quite okay. Please continue writing.

4yr
khaizer_john
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Very good story plot, and it caught my interest keep it up author, more updates to come haha char lang english lang sa una para choi haha but I you give my full support kuy padayon lang godbless

4yr
TypicallyAwesome
TypicallyAwesomeLv2

im going to read your book it looks really interesting but most of all i like your synopsis and also good luck in your upcoming books!!......

4yr
GoldenKitsune
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Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!

4yr
Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessLv13

I was already hooked after reading the synopsis, and the first chapter was really really good! Keep it up author, and keeo updating it! I'll continue to read this story because it's really very good!!!

4yr
Carciphones_02
Carciphones_02Lv3

I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father. This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!

4yr
TacoKun
TacoKunLv4

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

4yr
ruffatorres
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Hello kabayan! you're writing skills are incredible. I love your ideas. The story is well-plotted. I also read how creative you are in making a story line that pulls readers to read your story. Anyway, keep on writing! Inspire us all. Mabuhay!

4yr
SeverusMagicus
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When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

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