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Roxanne_Woods
Roxanne_WoodsLv144yr
2021-01-19 05:09

This is incredible and mind-blowing. I am in awe in front of your writing skills. Like, seriously. I have only read the first chapter so far and the feeling of betrayal in the very first part... god, you know how to play your audiences. I can鈥檛 promise to read this book to the end - or at least not in the time being - since the chapters are a bit long and I already have many books to read. However, for people who are interested in reading a long and well-written book, I definitely recommend this book.

Lumia: Other World

Mel_Aniv
4.9
225 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

Thanks!

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Roxanne_Woods
Roxanne_WoodsLv14

sure, no problem 馃槉

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Mel_AnivAuthor

Yey!

Roxanne_Woods:sure, no problem 馃槉
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

I know this is shameless but I want to ask for your support for the last time. I joined WPC and badly needed votes. The title was "Amnesia Of Genius Copycat" Please if you have spare stones 馃檹 It was a Zombie novel by the way 馃様

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

Hello 馃憢 I am back after 4 years. I really needed your support on my latest novel "Murim Founder of 7 Martial Paths" Please add it to your colls and also read. I improved a lot over the years. This is just me hoping 馃檹, I hope to have your understanding 馃様

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivAuthor

Hello! The author here! I am currently editng my work from scratch so there will be delays on my release. Remastering and revising my work with the help of my editor and proofreader. I will improve my writings and may you bear with me. That's all.

4yr

RaSi
RaSiLv2

Planning and plotting of story is good. Author has invested a lot of time and effort. Story comes out to be good a read. Would expect author to release more chapters. Grammar is quite okay. Please continue writing.

4yr
khaizer_john
khaizer_johnLv1

Very good story plot, and it caught my interest keep it up author, more updates to come haha char lang english lang sa una para choi haha but I you give my full support kuy padayon lang godbless

4yr
TypicallyAwesome
TypicallyAwesomeLv2

im going to read your book it looks really interesting but most of all i like your synopsis and also good luck in your upcoming books!!......

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GoldenKitsune
GoldenKitsuneLv11

Let me take a minute to process everything..... This was nice! A whole new level kind of nice! A heart tearing kind of nice that left us, readers, feeling emotional and passionate and...man I'm so touched. This is a one in a million kind of nice. You did a good job there author! I wish you luck on your writing journey! I look forward to more of your incoming chapters. Hands raised to you! Keep up the good work!

4yr
Pinkyprincess
PinkyprincessLv13

I was already hooked after reading the synopsis, and the first chapter was really really good! Keep it up author, and keeo updating it! I'll continue to read this story because it's really very good!!!

4yr
Carciphones_02
Carciphones_02Lv3

I like that despite the fast pacing of the first few chapters of Mael Growing up, you still keep it realistic. The MC is strong and talented which amazed his parents, but his genius still can't easily beat experience during the coming of age chapters when fighting his father. This is a good story, and there's a lot of chapter which I can spend a lot of time to read during my free time!!

4yr
TacoKun
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This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this shit. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

4yr
ruffatorres
ruffatorresLv13

Hello kabayan! you're writing skills are incredible. I love your ideas. The story is well-plotted. I also read how creative you are in making a story line that pulls readers to read your story. Anyway, keep on writing! Inspire us all. Mabuhay!

4yr
SeverusMagicus
SeverusMagicusLv2

When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

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