Review Detail of ThorAegir in Physics The Greatest Magic

Item: Physics The Greatest Magic
Rating: 2.6

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ThorAegirLv63yrThorAegir

Even if the magic concept of this story is good, the author does not have a good grasp of his story. Details are explained after the fact. A timeline constructed before writing would help the author to have a better grasp of his narration

Physics The Greatest Magic

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Sure at the beginning i didn't expect to turn it to a story but a short 1 or 2 chapter story, which caused it to seem a little rushed. But i have made sure to have good grasp and know what i plan on doing. But you have every right to assume that as a few things may not have meshed as they should.

3yr