Review Detail of Rorschach22 in The Conquerors bloodline

I'm going to be blunt and say that since I'm a man of culture one of the main reasons I'm liking this story so much is because the s.mut is quite s.exy and differentiated and that the plot isn't idi.otic like in many of the other stories of this genre but really engaging. This novel is amazing and a must read and I'm enjoying even the pacing of the story. The author himself is starting to wonder if the s.ex scenes are too numerous but in my opinion the problem isn't the number because if you think about it how many scenes did each girl get? Not that many and often enough in the scene there are multiple girl; no, the problem is the number of the girls and I'm scared that the more this story goes on the more is gonna resemble a sort of Pokémon with people. Let me try to explain my point talking about the girls of the first world: Esdeath and kurome are the best girls with more plot and screen time than everybody else, leone and najenda fit nicely in the story because leone is the perfect first girl being more animalistic in nature and is also perfect for starting an harem since that is the way of a lion pride while najenda is the perfect last girl since she is so driven to complete her objective that she put her emotions and everything else in second place. Akane and Chelsea are simply needed in the story because the chapters when kurome try to talk them into becoming one of her master's pets are a masterpiece that must be transformed into a holy book so that we can indoctrin ...Cough... Teach other people of false faith. All the others girls aren't especially needed in the harem in my opinion and I know this is gonna sound crazy but in an harem story is possibile to have females characters and not have them join the harem, REVOLUTIONARY! You have sniper girl and scissor girl that don't bring anything exceptional to the table apart for being a tsundere and an airhead respectively, I'm personally fed up with the first type in general while the chapters wasted on the second character talking about and healing from a trauma born from a 1 cm scar on the cheek in a world where humans are treated worse than cattle is so mor.onic that I think those chapters are the only ones that completely broke my immersion in the story. The wounded sisters and sayo are good characters (do we really need 3 copies of the same character? Isn't sayo enough?) because they allow the story to show that the MC isn't a psychopath but somebody that is fighting to overcome his childhood trauma and that he is ready to help others in a similar situation to at least start their own recovery but then becoming a harem member isn't a necessity, she could go back home to her village, maybe even togheter with her childhood friend if their friendship can survive their misadventures or even help the angel boy from esdeath's group to set up a less corrupt government since being a pleb that suffered heavily at the hands of the old nobility and a "member" of night raid she should easily become the voice of the people or even something else. Since we are talking about it I think you could have written a good couple of chapters about Parc having a nightmare after seeing someone else experiencing something similar to his trauma and then having najenda take care of him like he has done for the girls. I'm not a writer but maybe having the MC shows some big vulnerability at least once would make him more relatable to the readers and then with the help of najenda parc would strengthen his resolve to overcome every obstacles in his way just like the general. Anyway back to the girls and ahhh, If only there were some useless characters with relative s.ex scenes that are so irrelevant to the story that we could reincarnate them in another story and this novel will not suffer one bit... Oh wait there are the 2 rashaka girls. Joking aside these 2 don't add anything meaningful to the story and apart from the scene where they were stuck under the table while Esdeath and parc talked which was really funny their absence wouldn't be felt. Obviously those are my personal opinions on them but I think that at this point they are already starting to be numerous considering that it is only the first world and then the second world starts and the problem is going to grow even bigger since in this one there are going to be a lot of new members, like 30 or something . Don't take me wrong summer seems like a great character and you are doing an amazing work in writing the evolution of her relationship with parc but you must understand that we readers (maybe I'm the only one but I'm pretty confident that I can speak for a lot of people) are already attached to some of the previous characters and you are asking us to forget them because they are currently frozen in some magic evocation system and instead read about 50 new girls and start caring about them. I'm hoping to be proven wrong but if this keep going by the last world I see this ending with a lot of hollow characters that have been in the story for only 3 chapters each and an MC that will have to act like an asshole since he can't spend time with everybody .... And let's just pretend that the parc who said all those things about being a responsabile father and the parc who is currently kepping the woman pregnant with his child frozen so that she could not deliver him/her child to the world are two different MCs ok? Last thing, instead of skipping terrarium you should have written about it, some adventure with the girls from the first world, maybe fight to clear a piece of land from the monsters and build an house so that when he moves to the second world instead of having the girls being frozen in a pokeball you could have said that the girls are living there in your private world. P.S. I know that I have written mostly about things I don't like in the story but that's because I'm really enjoying it and I want to see it improve. English is not my first language, (you probably already know from all my mistakes) and I spent most of my lunchbreak typing on a century old phone with the autocorrector set in another language this shi.tty wall of text that maybe the author is never gonna read, this is just to make you understand how much I'm interested in this story