I read the first arc - Akama ga kill and finished 115ish
Well based on initial comments section browse, I was not really encouraged to continue on, but I did and I am not disappointed. I personally Hate Beta MCs, but contrary to the comments saying he was one, it was not true. The MC is not OP but definitely not a Beta passive MC. The MC's character is one that you would expect of harem seeking protagonist. (actually seeking them and not waiting for them show up.)
- The plot is not something completely new with different missions but a revised version of them making them different enough to be enjoyable. The plot is a big positive. (However, the ending was rushed, authors seemed excited to get to next thing, it is still good just lower quality compared to the previous chapters)
- A major problem with most fanfic is that the Hero (Plus other characters) of the main story is worshipped by the ff authors and everything they touched, powers (also women), the fanfic hero leaves them be and considers it immoral to change. Fortunately, you don't see much of that. Tatsumi does not get to join them, making the story interesting. (Authors still gives him the leftover (not liked) girl and good ending, as a sort of compensation, but meh, it was not a loss for MC so IDC, similarly Wave is compensated) -( *venting - I do not understand fanfics which author changes everything but scared to break up a couple. (doming the world ok but not taking someone's woman) yet they go for (R-18, harem seeking MC)) Good thing the author used his right (power) to make harem targets not end up with cannon partners and actually used his 'author-powers' to not make them be together in the first place. (It is understandable that authors avoid stealing other's women, but how it was done here is a perfect loophole that should be utilized much more, if MC is harem-seeking, and getting best FLs)
My only issue was towards the end the plot was sacrificed and some areas concentrated on R-18 variation affecting the plot. (Chelsea's Yuri action was forced, while it would have been better if MC actually build a better relationship with her during the chapters of her 'lust'. Chelsea's lust was not executed right. Why was she even there as a maid? Cat Form is a better disguise.)
All I can say is that for Akama ga Kill FF this really good, there is a plot close enough to make you part of the same world and different enough to not make you bored. Lots of R-18 content.
I will also put my review of the next word in the reply section after reading it.