Item: The Heart of Gaia
Rating: 5
Author: Kiarakent

KiarakentLv14yr

2020-09-08 13:58

The author was able to build the characters well and inject it to align with the storyline. The story flows smoothly. It was very interesting to read. I'm looking forward to read the rest as well. Keep up the good work

The Heart of Gaia

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Hi! Mr. Author here! I'm quite critical of my own work, and since I'm busy I have a hard time updating with a specified schedule. Though I make sure that I have at least posted 1 chapter for my readers. I'm a newbie writer so I hope people that read my novel would please leave a review or write a comment. That way I'll keep trying to improve as we move further into the Story of Knoxx Abbot. The comments help me motivate myself hehe. Anyways thank you for my readers for being patient with me. Hopefully you'll keep supporting me.

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Wow, I gotta say the first chapter had me intrigued. There is a lot happening in the first chapter and all of its exciting and interesting. There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that this is a really interesting work that I would definitely recommend to any in for an exciting ride.

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Just amazing!! I just got hooked up with your novel. And yes, the first chapter was such intense that I needed to hold my breathe sometimes. You are doing a great work author and your novel will soon reach in the high ranking. This book is highly recommended!

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I love this story, like what the heck, this work should be illegal! Oh my gosh, I was sucked in from the first couple of sentences. I like how the author throws us into the world they have created. I would recommend this to anyone, this is like - *throws table*

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Amazing story line author...The first chapter and you are hooked...Really a great read...I can't suggest you for any grammatical mistakes because myself is not really great in it but there where only minor mistakes like punctuation marks and all...👏👏👏 But I like the way you wrote the chasing and running scene, it was really easy to imagine it in your head that how it was happening?? Short the lengthy chapters, we can read some in next chapter with offcourse cliffhangers... only this is suggetion if you think it is correct otherwise really good read. 👍👍👍

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Your story is really good and the plot line is interesting. Your first chapter is an amazing hook that has readers wanting to know more. Plus, you continued with making the story interesting instead of letting it fall after the first chapter. You know how to keep readers wanting to know more. You do have grammar mistakes that are easily fixable. Other than that, good job!

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Good story line and very creative, the first chapter already pinned me into reading further, making me want to find out more about what is really happening, and I think it is good when an author manages to keep the readers on their toes. few mistakes here and there that is easily fixed no biggie. keep up the good work, you created a very solid world so keep improving it. As you said you are new just like me, whatever mistake, we learn from them to improve.

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