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EternalNightLotus
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2020-08-31 00:10

I really love the pacing of this story. The first chapter really set up the mystery and from then on it only kept going. I really love books with fantasy elements but some of them tend to fall along the path of tropes and cliche but this story isn't one of them! I absolutely love the way this is written. It isn't something that let's the reader get bored. The changes of pov really broaden the set up so you really want to figure out protagonists origins and really start to root for him. There aren't any notable typos or errors but the writing could do with some changes, i find it is very dialogue driven in some parts which leaves little to explore in terms of the scenery and background, but that's just my personal preference. Altogether I think this book tells a great story so keep writing author and keep up the good work.

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