Review Detail of Darlene_Virginia in Yudham- The war that trembled all the Planes

The story plot is different. The background has a great historical feel and adds highlight to the story. I would like to see many more chapters in the future from the author. Just a suggestion, the paragraphs are too long to read. If they could be reduced into smaller ones, it would be nice. Good start author! Cheers!! Enjoy writing!!