Review Detail of WikiLover in From Mortal to Divinity
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This is an impressive work of fiction. To start with it is a jumpchain novel, and the speed of the jumpchains are quite high. I personally love it because the high speed keeps me engaged and entertained. I’ve never been in the middle of a jump and thought “this is dragging too much” which is a real problem in other jumpchains. I’ve read some that will put 50 chapters into one jump or bring characters from one jump to the next meaning extra chapters in between jumps. Most jumpchains do this because it’s comfortable for them to have reoccurring voices and they can’t write with so many new voices every 5-10 chapters. Let’s talk about characterization: the characterization in this novel is fantastic and realistic, while the main character is almost reminiscent of John wick. There is focus to the mc’s actions, he enters a world and everything he does is aimed at completing his objectives and I love it. The writing is fantastic I have no gripes about the quality, grammar and spelling are both top notch. The stability of updating has not left me wanting, it comes quickly and I consume it much quicker. The development of the story is amazing, you really notice every time the main character utilizes something he has learned during a previous jump. I’m looking forward to wherever the author takes this in the next jump and every jump thereafter. The world development is a solid 5, you never forget which world the mc is in and that is a problem I’ve seen in other jumpchain novels where jumps seem to mesh together and you forget where the author has taken you. This novel definitely has my recommendation, if you have trouble with the first few chapters trust me when I say if you can get to the third jump that’s when it really starts to shine and the author locks in their style.
From Mortal to Divinity
Servant_Ambrosius
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A jump chain novel is when for some reason the main character is forced to go from world to world. This can be because some powerful being wants them to hunt down monsters, kill main characters from the various worlds, fight against other people jumping worlds, simply entertain them, or it could be as a result of the main character making a wish. In this case the main character gets to do a CYOA which stands for choose your own adventure. Essentially the main character chooses advantages and disadvantages for each world he goes to and then lives out his life with some goal in mind to finish before moving on.
holson_Charles:wtf is a jump chain novel?
Dude, that was a deep and very informative review, I love it. I had already read all the chapters that had been posted and I decided to make a review saying how good it is and explaining the pros and cons, though it was honestly just one con because that was the only thing that I thought could've been changed/improved and honestly it's extremely insignificant. I thought that my review was pretty good, but yours was absolutely perfect. You explained everything perfectly. And I just want you to know that if you haven't already made a book, you NEED to make one. I mean, you even made paragraphs in you review, I've never seen anyone do that. You have the makings of a good author.
So far he’s in a relationship with Azula from avatar and Scathach from fate. I don’t really ship him with people, I just write the character interactions and if it ends up like that then it does.
Shadewind:Can you tell me about the romance. ..?
Bakkoy:Does the azula also have the advantages and disadvantages of every jump like ambrosius?
Hey, is he actually in a romantic relationship or not? I think it looks like they are just sex friends and don't look like a couple. Please explain in order I don't misunderstand or I'm the one who doesn't really understand love hahaha. It's about chapter 52
Servant_Ambrosius:So far he’s in a relationship with Azula from avatar and Scathach from fate. I don’t really ship him with people, I just write the character interactions and if it ends up like that then it does.
Bakkoy:Hey, is he actually in a romantic relationship or not? I think it looks like they are just sex friends and don't look like a couple. Please explain in order I don't misunderstand or I'm the one who doesn't really understand love hahaha. It's about chapter 52
author friend, can you take a doubt? Every life the MC goes to a new world he can choose abilities exchanged for points, right? But will the abilities he chose in the past world still hold or be reset? Does the God who sends you to each world have the power to interfere until I point to the MC and the world he is in? if you can take these doubts away I will be grateful.
Servant_Ambrosius:You just made my week. Now I'm extra motivated to write.
dukroger:author friend, can you take a doubt? Every life the MC goes to a new world he can choose abilities exchanged for points, right? But will the abilities he chose in the past world still hold or be reset? Does the God who sends you to each world have the power to interfere until I point to the MC and the world he is in? if you can take these doubts away I will be grateful.
Servant_Ambrosius:You just made my week. Now I'm extra motivated to write.