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DeadSaltedFish
DeadSaltedFishLv54yr
2020-07-03 11:42

First! I've read the first three chapters in a hurry, and they basically shove a good amount of info straight up that I just skipped them. There was no emotional investment on my part either as the MC was abruptly introduced out of nowhere. There was no life whatsoever, everything is technical as though the one narrating was an AI.

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Monkeybro
MonkeybroLv11

you just said you practically skipped chapters and are surprised when you don't feel invssted in the character. wow🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️

yoohime
yoohimeLv6

if it has too many info dumps then its a no no novel for me... wasting time reading useless words

DeadSaltedFish
DeadSaltedFishLv5

The first few info dumps, not an entire chapter, and I'm not surprised.

Monkeybro:you just said you practically skipped chapters and are surprised when you don't feel invssted in the character. wow🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️
Benno
BennoLv14

I have read it and its the same for me

Monkeybro:you just said you practically skipped chapters and are surprised when you don't feel invssted in the character. wow🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️
Astolfo_My_Waifu
Astolfo_My_WaifuLv11

Its funny amirite

Monkeybro:you just said you practically skipped chapters and are surprised when you don't feel invssted in the character. wow🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️
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TheDolphin
TheDolphinLv13

Potential harem warning, and with tsunderes. The tactics employed by the MC are rash and with little logic, such as letting the Gnolls attack at night despite them having night vision because "If they want a fight, give it to them" logic that only serves to "bolster" MC's image to the viewer. Plot armor is also a thing, and non of the town building stuff goes indebt despite all the screens, like why the towns people he summoned don't question anything after suddenly coming to existence, people from actual Greek suddenly came onto shore and just acted like nothing happened and followed the MC just cause. Author also doesn't know any real history, as apparently the only thing he watched was 300 and thinks that all Spartans just wear red robes, when they wore a chest guard and helmet; in this novel MC also makes Spartans throw javelins and then rush with daggers, which is just wrong on so many levels, like how Spartans never carried daggers, or how they mainly fought in formation with and didn't just bum rush with these so called daggers, they had swords, but not daggers. The translation is also pretty bad, sentences just stop for some reason without any context and words are freely swapped around, what's worse is that numbers are also swapped, like in the beginning MC is saved by Spartans, then when showing town info it says he has 0 spartan soldiers, then later says he has 80. These are only some of the issues affecting this novel, it's a novel you'd force yourself to read once you can't find anything else. It had a decent start with a semi-smart MC not thinking with his dick and actually having some form of planning, then it became a Lords Empire.

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