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Helel
HelelLv54yr
2020-05-15 05:05

This story is one of the most bland and generic fictions I have seen on this site. The main character has no motivation, no well defined goal, just existing and getting stronger to complete a ROB given mission, nothing above that. He has absolutely no personality, being just an amalgamation of shounen main character stereotypes. The way the story is written is just irritating, the author gives you the conclusion of an arc in the first chapter and then presents the events of the arc in a series of semi-flashbacks from the view of random characters and even these are spoiled withing the first few paragraphs. The romance is half-arsed, Yasaka just straight up come up to him and asks him if he would like to have her as his wife since she fell in love with him after the "When I saw you do........I suddenly felt the capacity to love after........time" cliché. There is nothing interesting about this story, reading it feels like rewatching a generic shounen anime for the 7th time since you have nothing better to do, you know the plot of the next arc before the current one finishes.

Infinite Swordman and His Cafe

LuxVonDeux
4.3
66 Chs

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

It's problem if all bad harem stories, good ones always have some general problems/plot line, bad ones just do whatever autor can think of and get girls. I think it's problem of priorities.

4yr
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

Author deletedmy review that was the same rating as this one. I'm surprised yours stayed up

Yuri_is_Ntr:It's problem if all bad harem stories, good ones always have some general problems/plot line, bad ones just do whatever autor can think of and get girls. I think it's problem of priorities.
4yr
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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I'm more interested how same guy, that complain on another stories being generic and boring, make something like this. 🤔

Hentai_Senchou:Author deletedmy review that was the same rating as this one. I'm surprised yours stayed up
4yr
1
Hentai_Senchou
Hentai_SenchouLv6

Well, he's written the same story about getting cyoa powers dropped in the mc's lap 3-4 times and dropped them all at about 30-40 chapters

Yuri_is_Ntr:I'm more interested how same guy, that complain on another stories being generic and boring, make something like this. 🤔
4yr
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