I would like to say that the story is good, but I would be lying, at the beginning I expected a lot from the story, great expectations, but the story continued, there is no suspense, there is no conflict, the Fic is basically "Slice of life" in a world with super powers, of course, there are villains and it seems that the author is trying to do interesting things but in my opinion not only is he not succeeding, but he became monotonous, boring, I highly recommend the author to either rewrite the story or start a new one.
MyStomachHurts
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LIKEIt doesn't matter, after all, it's just my opinion, I'm also of the opinion that although I don't like the story, I recognize the amount of work it is to write, so even if I don't like it, I have to congratulate you for continuing to write and getting better.
MyStomachHurts:I am not rewriting the story or making a new one. That’s just way too much work
MyStomachHurts:I am not rewriting the story or making a new one. That’s just way too much work