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Who will be your first partner? In the original I found Celeste a little boring as a woman, I understand that she was very worried due to other events, but after Orion became her husband, she almost didn't listen to his opinion unless he said the same thing twice thing
the mc looks like he's 14 or 15 the way he acts. Which world is he in?
Author, I understand that in this world all women want to get pregnant just like in the original, but I recommend that you don't do that until the end of the ff since your goal is to have obscene scenes and Orion would have to dedicate all his time to taking care of his women with babies and of course he wouldn't go after other women in the village. It wouldn't make sense for you to give him the power to control the pregnancy and still have him get someone pregnant.
Do you plan to give MC more powers on the day of the awakening ceremony? The vines are quite powerful, even more so in hordes. I suggest giving him a maximum pleasure skill to satisfy his women + infinite energy, since most of the novel will be focused on obscenity, it doesn't matter if you leave the MC mega operated
Why doesn't he kill Diodora? this excuse that you don't care what they do is just stupid. All the MC has to do is look at him and he'll go up in smoke, but he'd rather Diodora ruin more lives like Asia's. For me, MCs like this have a pathetic life, thinking they are divine beings, even though it costs nothing to help. Their sole purpose is fanservice for nervous 16 year olds. Translator