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Review Detail of Poporu in In MHA With Madara’s powers

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The premise of the story is, dude got wrecked by flying truck-kun, reincarnated to hma as madara, by the use of his convenient power called luck a.k.a. plot convenience. He isn't transported, deported, transmigrated or any of that kind of shxt, he goes out from the other hole after peepee hole, no not that hole that looks like a chrysanthemum, the other one. After getting out, he laughs, because he is a ducking masochistic perverted motherducker. Yeah, he didn't cry because, he's hurting all over by being evicted through that hole you shoot your dingdong, he laughed at it. So the story progresses, and his mother died shortly after his birth, and his father is, surprisingly, also dead, so we came to the house of the friend of his parents, that is surprisingly, the house of one of his conquest, oh! I forgot, he doesn't think with his dick, he just named 3 women that he wants to conquer straight out, just for the heck of it, well if their are other's who wants to get picked that are hot, might he add them too on his shag list, he's not really perverted, just want to shag a couple of kids here and there, then add a few more on the road. Anyways, continuing to the story, 4 years passed, too fast, he still treats his foster parents as nothing but an impostor, no just kidding, he doesn't even know them, they're just convenient strangers, that is giving him tons of stuffs so, he's pretending to love them, well whatever, he unlocks his sharingan and chakra thereafter. The end, oh! He began training, using tons of thing he shouldn't have known, and began doing ninja stuffs, but the strangers, just thought of it as normal and just ignored everything weird about it, he's lucky by the way. I'll be honest, I don't like stories that retains their memories when reincarnating as a baby. An infants brain can't even retain information that long so how does he have that kind of memory, unless his brain is fully developed at the start. You could've done something like progressively unlocking memories through dreams, so he won't be too overpowered, but has great potential to do so. But, you just have to want the mc to train as a child like everything is normal and no problem would arise with it. For the sole purpose of wanting to stomp those, within his grade and pose a few for those lovely ladies. His oh so convenient luck is good, but your execution is just so bad, having a character with great luck is ok, but a fated luck, like everything just revolves around the mc is just plain bad. His conquest about his harem, started out so bad, that it just feels like he's a perverted lolicon, who would just act like some douche, and bitches just follow. He straight out tells who he wants, and yep, knowing that he'd atleast conquer 3 woman just cause he wants to be a dixk, and pick up some scraps along the way, just leave a bad taste in the mouth. It's hard to get invested in a novel that you know he'd fxcked them, but you're expected to wait on how he ducked them, how will their story progress? I think it's more of a, how will he coax them so that he can add them to the shag list. His training, as a kid, not being questioned about it is like a plot, that you just throw out, so that mc would stomp people, and go full face slapping, is just full self insert, ego booster, so that you could become better than everone else, and it feels like, you didn't even thought about the plot, just straight out write what you think would boost your ego, even if the mc doesn't have character growth. As I said, I just ducking hate stories that reincarnated as an infant, so that you have a reason to train and become so op before the start of the real plot. For the sole purpose of ego boosting.

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In MHA With Madara’s powers

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MyStomachHurts
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Hahaha thanks bro 👍🏼

hatsu_miku
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i appreciate that you censored every swear word xD