Review Detail of AShinyGiratina in The Mind God

Good concept ruined by really bad grammar and underwhelming writing. This story is pretty much just one missed bad opportunity as the author is unable to convey anything they would want to past the terrible grammar that is seen in pretty much ever chapter. To the author, if you could possibly dedicate a week or two to editing the previous chapters and correcting bad grammar and weird bolding patterns I feel like that would be a lot more helpful to the popularity of this WN than just continuing with the current quality.