AShinyGiratina
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AShinyGiratina3yrPostedGood concept ruined by really bad grammar and underwhelming writing. This story is pretty much just one missed bad opportunity as the author is unable to convey anything they would want to past the terrible grammar that is seen in pretty much ever chapter. To the author, if you could possibly dedicate a week or two to editing the previous chapters and correcting bad grammar and weird bolding patterns I feel like that would be a lot more helpful to the popularity of this WN than just continuing with the current quality.
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5Head
If his inventory was able to store anything as long as it is not living, then the same should apply to the undead as well. - AShinyGiratina3yrCommented
peepoGiggles
'This is not so bad…' She thought with a blissful smile on her face. - AShinyGiratina3yrCommented
Wait didn't he say he got a haircut?
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what's that? commas don't exist wdym
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you're* please this grammar is killing me
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monka
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5'6 lol
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monka
While traveling, he carried the egg of the high-grade spirit beast with him, as he sensed that it was absorbing the surrounding death energy in the cursed abyss.