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rockrock
rockrockLv144yr
2020-08-23 16:13

Yea this novel is great from the start but the more you read the more you lost the drive to continue. Only the system and the abilities he create makes the novel interesting but his life is not so much.

The Mind God

Krizantem
4.3
194 Chs

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Krizantem
KrizantemAuthor

Only the system and the abilities he create makes the novel interesting = It is his life creating the things.

4yr
rockrock
rockrockLv14

Your supreme lrd SS is more fun its unpredictable. But i hope you give mc more trouble because the way i see it he only have trouble evolving. His fights are fairly easy.

4yr
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Krizantem
KrizantemAuthor

Hi, guys sorry for the not posting for four days straight, I had an traffic accident, that was the reason I could not write and post, Again, sorry about the I could not post chapters.

4yr

EtherealStar
EtherealStarLv15

like most of this author, great story with great potential. but grammar and spelling is really bad. and the update stability started good, but crumbled recently.

4yr
Krizantem
KrizantemAuthor

- Work Days - Monday - The Mind God Tuesday - The Mind God Wednesday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Thursday - The Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Friday - The Mind God or Supreme Lord Shapeshifter Sunday - Free-time or working on next book

4yr
Thiago_guedes
Thiago_guedesLv11

the protagonist understands that humans are selfish even the "good" ones are selfish in the end, I like how the protagonist is going so far without a lot of boring girls to tease and he, he is not a virgin or an idiot who wants to stay with the families of others and I like this lonely way of wanting to stay in the forest and everything, it would be incredible to create a domain only of magical beasts ... you are doing an incredible job if you continue like this.

4yr
Tucker100000
Tucker100000Lv12

This story had a great start. The system was a little off, but could be corrected and improved over time. It did not get improved and only went downhill from there. The system seems to forget simple things. For example, it missed when the MC killed a three legged chicken and it did not update the Exp on it. It just randomly says, “you killed enough things to here’s a level or two”. The character has many loopholes and for a character that is supposed to get smarter every level, he seems to forget simple things. One time he decides to kill two mages because, “although they are non hostile they provide a passive threat to me that could go off anytime”. The problem is that the MC forgot he has this power that can make people forget things and make them have illusions. He could have just made them forget any trace of him then put them under an illusion so they can’t see him or his traces. Also the grammar is quite bad. I must say though that this story had great potential. The way the character thought was in a unique way, a way I really liked (at first). The power he had was also unique. A great book that had huge potential, that gave me more thoughts and an unique way of thinking. Poor execution though in my opinion.

4yr
Umut_Hendem
Umut_HendemLv1

It's really good and,give it a shot and it will definelitely catch your intention.Brion is improving good and the universe is written well.I expect great things from this novel.

4yr
Krizantem
KrizantemAuthor

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4yr
OloEyktan
OloEyktanLv4

story is great and interisting but i hope you will get a Editor to make this more easy for the eyes.. ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾

4yr
animepancakes
animepancakesLv2

Terrible writing quality, couldn't get to chapter 2 so I'll just put 4 to everything but writing quality .........................................

4yr
Sildgutt
SildguttLv14

MC is stupid, it could be good except that he focuses on brain and directly improves brain power. MC is way OP. never met anything that is a challenge. The writing is barely readable and in some cases needs a few seconds of interpretation after reading a sentence. I give up on this book

4yr
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