Review Detail of NimbusApparels in Ring Of Chaos

The story is good and the character development is passable, the world background is acceptable. The only glaring thing I can say that annoys me are the UNFORGIVABLE GRAMMAR MISTAKES that are too numerous to ignore and enjoy the story! I'm sorry I tried to push on with his novel but I can't simply ignore bad grammar! And it doesn't seem to be getting better with newer chapters!