NimbusApparels
of reading
42
Read books
Badges
4Moments
25
NimbusApparels2yrCommentedThis does not make sense!
"Technically, Harvey, you're the heir now," Gerald then followed, "I am the old fuckers would shut their mouths as soon as you make an appearance."- NimbusApparels2yrCommented
Harvy then cleared ‘HIS’ throat!!
"I… I was kidding," Harvey let out an awkward chuckle as soon as she saw Beatrice biting her lip, her eyes almost finding their way towards the floor, "A… anyway," Harvey then cleared her throat, before turning around… towards his brother. - NimbusApparels2yrReplied to Nesquick45
Apoted into a poor family! 🤣
Tiana interrupted and said with conviction, " I will take that chance, and if I fail, I hope valley master can support the orphanage where I came from. " - NimbusApparels2yrReplied to Master_Atlest
Id rather the author took the abuse route instead of the rape route.
"I don't care, Hans," Charlotte shook her head and repeated her words, "She allowed her own son to be molested. What the fuck kind of mother does that? And you're telling Van to forgive her? What the fuck is wrong with you? You're the youngest of us three and you're already going senile." - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
I get the feeling that the author is trying to say that getting molested by his father is a good thing!!!
"I don't care, Hans," Charlotte shook her head and repeated her words, "She allowed her own son to be molested. What the fuck kind of mother does that? And you're telling Van to forgive her? What the fuck is wrong with you? You're the youngest of us three and you're already going senile." - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
“Victoria kneeled infront of Paris” Isnt Victoria the one unconsious right now?? Dont you mean Charlotte!!
"Harvey. Don't," before Harvey could finish his words, Gerald suddenly appeared behind him, grabbing his shoulder and stopping him from saying anything else. - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
Stop miXing He/She, Him/ Her. It spoils the immersion of the story and is a basic grammer mistake for a writer of your calibre.
His screams of pain reached even the Encampment, Andrea, who was currently talking with Sarah, could not help but stand up as she stood up towards the direction of Van's voice. However, before she could rush towards him, Sarah stopped him. - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
Do you mean ‘Is there?’ because ‘there is?’ Doesnt make sense here!
This paragraph has been deleted. - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
The author said she came from a poor family in an earlier chapter!
Tiana interrupted and said with conviction, " I will take that chance, and if I fail, I hope valley master can support the orphanage where I came from. " - NimbusApparels2yrReplied to p1xel
Its 2!
Athan stopped in front of a boulder that was the size 2 in diameter, After getting into a simple stance, Athan threw a punch. - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
Who’s CRINGE NOW!
"Omega Fist of Destruction!" - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
What happened to the guy from Elsium, you know the conciousness in the skeleton and the other member of the force that caused the first appocolipse..?? And daniel didnt say good bye to the Head and the Healing lady and the other memebers of the order!
Ch 1167 The End...or, the Beginning?(End) - NimbusApparels2yrReplied to Dextuary
She is an enemy of the church so how could could she be involved in such a powerful spell.
Somewhere, off in the sky, he could hear a Basilisk screaming. He ignored it, knowing that it could not trespass when the might of the Saints was still present in the air. - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
ANGSRIANS ASSEMBLE!!
Assemble - NimbusApparels2yrReplied to MelomaniaCh 154 Negotiation
- NimbusApparels2yrCommented
I bet its Not the Ellen show!!
In fact, she had even reminded him of a famous host back on earth, and for a while, he had contemplated the idea of producing a similar for the Network with her as the star. - NimbusApparels2yrCommented
Kamasutra!
Elementary and Dimensional magic were not the only two in existence. There was a third that he had set aside all these years, and as it bloomed within him, he knew that he would never be able to ignore it, ever again. - NimbusApparels2yrCommentedCh 1070 Hunger(2)
- NimbusApparels2yrCommented
TWILIGHT SAGA!
Thankfully, he had resisted the urge, and on reflecting back on the feeling that had almost taken control of him, he was reminded of a very famous fictional object in a trilogy back on Earth.