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dheerajsingh00002
dheerajsingh00002Lv64yr
2020-04-21 02:32

Well one thing I like about this novel is that a clear picture of the power levels that lws lack so my advice to you is that you explain about power system in more depth overall start is little bit similar to lws tho

LWS: Liye's Legacy

Alemillach
4.9
233 Chs

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Alemillach
AlemillachAuthor

Thank you for the review!

4yr
Ruxx0028
Ruxx0028Lv11

the best thing actually are, author ain't using bad words that can make those youtube videos demonetised

3yr
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LadyTass2001
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The Prequel to the first ever contracted original novel on the sight has everything you've come to expect from Last Wish System, well thought out lovable characters, Amazing world building, believable interactions, a powerful system guiding the main hero but making him do the work to unlock more. A bit of mystery, a lot of revenge, what's not to like?? Come join the adventures of Shiba, Eini and Lina as they grow, learn, loose and win.

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ErmaNadera
ErmaNaderaLv5

The story tells of a rise and reincarnation of a slave to be become strong and with good heart and spirit willingly help others in need. Kudos to the author and the translators.... More chapters please....

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Xaqairy
XaqairyLv12

Having read Last Wish System, I've been looking forward to the prequel! It's great being able to see Shiba's origin. Despite a few common typos, which I mostly attribute to English not being Ale's first language, the story and setting are well thought out and easy to understand. Keep up the great work, Ale!

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ws04
ws04Lv13

truly five stars, an excellent prequel, I'm going to cry, it ties into the next book perfectly, I look forward to the sidequel very much, good luck ale

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Fhxryvx
FhxryvxLv5

Excellent story but I wish there was a clear representation of the power levels. 😂😂😂😂😂——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-//——————-//——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-

4yr
darknlight
darknlightLv2

The writing quality is good with minor typos and grammatical error. The story development is not forced and has a great flow. The characters doesn't betray the the character design and it is interesting to see how they grown to the characters in LWS. The world background is detailed and the missing information can be backed up in the later chapters. Overall, its great and thank you to the author for writing the book.

4yr
TacoKun
TacoKunLv4

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes in this ****. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna take a **** much. If this novel got some drive, thank God its still alive.

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ToronToron91
ToronToron91Lv14

Interesting leveling concepts in this story. I feel that the story is about to move a bit faster from chapter 40 onwards, especially since main characters have already decided to work together. Looking forward to the updates!😊👍

4yr
LoliSlayerz
LoliSlayerzLv3

Good author, good story. He also likes most of the comments on his story! What else could you wish for? Have fun reading for those who haven’t read the story and are just reading the reviews first!

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