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2020-04-25 14:43

Having read Last Wish System, I've been looking forward to the prequel! It's great being able to see Shiba's origin. Despite a few common typos, which I mostly attribute to English not being Ale's first language, the story and setting are well thought out and easy to understand. Keep up the great work, Ale!

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