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MokouFriedChicken
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2020-04-19 12:28

A good start for another gaming fic. Grammar has minimal errors. Dialogue feels organic and prose flows natural. World building and characters are well flesged out as well. Keep on writing 👍

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Chen_Xiao_Yang
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Thank you for your feedback, I will use this to further improve on my works

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