Review Detail of Jean_Fere in A Path of Bone and Poison

TLDR: It's pretty MEH. It starts out well with a fun idea, but that gets lost and rather quickly and the problems dominate. First, the writing is at best bland. Almost everything, is the protagonist's inner monologue, and it's very passive. I don't even know how to properly describe it. Second the plot, it's really driven from on high. I have no trouble with fate/destiny/the gods/higher powers screwing with a character but there has to be rhyme or reason to it and there has to be a limit to how often it happens. The main character is now on his 4th reroll, the love interest her third and the only reason is the higher powers intervened once again, That's just big stuff, for small things they show up around every ten chapters Third the characters. I started out liking the mc, but he (girl body definitely still a guy) just got so undefined it was painful. The rest well so far there really aren't any. Closest you get is the FL, and she is not very interesting at this point Finally the world is incoherent. There's just too much lazy writing and 'oops wrote myself into a corner I'll just do an a$$pull to fix it'. Where it stands now it reads like video game grinding novel, where the MC is grinding away like a gold farmer but isn't allowed to progress or gain anything.