First of all, up till where I read, this is a good book. The character development is on point. But it suffers from a sever misuse of punctuation marks. The author, as far as I can tell, has a good grasp of English as a whole. But for some reason, he does not, I repeat, DOES NOT use punctuation marks properly. Sentences are huge but if you read closely, you would notice it is actually 2 sentences and the author just forgot to put a fullstop. Because one of the words in the middle of the sentence starts with a capital letter. There is also a total lack of proper commas. Now, I know I should not expect pro tier writting from a webnovel author. But it is just sad to see a good novel with otherwise perfect grammar horribly horribly using punctuation marks. This one thing completely killed the immersion for me. I read ahead to one of the later chapters, punctuation is still just as bad. I don't know if the author is improving his linguistic skills, but he definitely put the usage of punctuation marks into the trashcan.
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