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Review Detail of LordofMountains in The Roleplayer

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LordofMountains
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advantages : 1_the writing quality is good 2_ the story isn't fast-paced with too op character 3_the world background is acceptable disadvantages 1-the main character intelligence is trash on par with greed from overheard no no even greed is more creative than him 2_main character is supposed to be top 40 or something gamer but the way he use the ability is find limited and there is no creativity 3_the author force the story by making main character doesn't use his status although he is facing powerful organization that_as author described_ can take small nation by a bat and human strength with some ****y abilities and a mask so I dropped it not my cup of tea at least greed was humorous this doesn't deserve more that 3 stars

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