The worst problem with this story is the MC. Everything that comes out of his mouth is either Chuuni cringe or just plain stupid. It's so bad that I've decided to stop reading. He's so dumb that it makes me ashamed to be a human.
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I honestly hate “reviews” like this. If you can even call this one. At least provide examples, say something you actually liked, or mention a way you think the author could improve. Otherwise it’s just you insulting someone else’s hard work. You don’t have to like every story you come across. Your entitled to your own opinion. Mentioning things you didn’t like could potentially help the author see things they didn’t realize may have been problems. They might even take the criticism and use it to improve, or they could straight up ignore it. It’s their right since it’s their story, but actively insulting someone’s novel just because you don’t like something in it is just rude and disrespectful. You said the “worst problem with this story is the MC”, but you didn’t say anything else that was bad about it. You didn’t even give a good explanation as to why he’s “so dumb he makes you ashamed to be human”. My mom said it best “If you don’t have anything nice to say and you can’t be respectful when pointing out someone’s flaws, then shut up and eat your cereal.”
