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SilverSerpent
SilverSerpentLv104yr
2020-06-24 09:39

This is my review from the previous version of the book. The story seems well so far, I hope you can stay constant with uploads and don't drop. Please don't make this a harem. Also can you not follow the gamer's mage way, but if you do make it original.

The Roleplayer

RileyPetesGeralt
4.5
40 Chs

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RileyPetesGeralt
RileyPetesGeraltAuthor

Thanks for your feedback! We're definitely staying consistent with our uploads, and we take note of those!

4yr
XxSurViValXx
XxSurViValXxLv1

please check out my book Reid Flannel, won't do wonders for me. Sorry for self-advertising.

4yr
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RileyPetesGeralt
RileyPetesGeraltAuthor

Hey guys, It's Riley Petesgeralt here. So, I've just reposted this story, and will be conducting regular updates here because we're participating in the Webnovel Spirity Awards Spring 2020! Do vote, review, and comment to help us out! We're committed to provide you, the readers, regular updates. Also, to be notified when we post, do add this novel to your collection! We update regularly every Sunday, and sometimes we'll do another additional update in the middle of the week.

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BitchSlayer
BitchSlayerLv3

Saw you on subreddit TheGamer and came here. Nice going though. It looked almost similar to gamer at first but it is getting better and different with every chapter. Keep it up and do not drop it midway.

4yr
DivineHyper
DivineHyperLv12

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Bob_The_Lard_God
Bob_The_Lard_GodLv10

A bland copy of a webtoon called The Gamer, another trashy story where each fight boils down to "Skill of the week vs villain of the week type battles". Same thing, but this rehash is made by a person with the same intelligence as the average Overgeared reader.

4yr
AppleyGod
AppleyGodLv10

The worst problem with this story is the MC. Everything that comes out of his mouth is either Chuuni cringe or just plain stupid. It's so bad that I've decided to stop reading. He's so dumb that it makes me ashamed to be a human.

4yr
LordofMountains
LordofMountainsLv3

Reveal spoiler

4yr
RileyPetesGeralt
RileyPetesGeraltAuthor

Hey guys, we have some great news to share with you all! First of all, it's been exactly 2 months since we started uploading, and we're happy to announce that we've hit 100k readers! We honestly never expected our story to come this far; our original plan was just to publish what we had already written. However, receiving so many views and so much support has sparked a flame within us, and motivated us to write more, despite our tight schedules. In fact, we've completely derailed from our original story, which probably would've ended in 20 chapters, but instead plan to expand this into something bigger! Furthermore, we are excited to announce that we have been contracted by WebNovel! Being contracted was one of the pre-requisites for the competition that we're participating in, the WebNovel Spirity Awards Spring 2020, and we are very grateful for this opportunity! None of this would have been possible without features (Check out WSA Weekly #2 for an analysis of our first three chapters by our editor, Hao!) and the support of WebNovel, but of course the most important supporter of all was you, the reader! We plan to slowly amp up our release schedule to twice a week so look forward to that! Also, we realize that Riley being the only character may get repetitive, but fret not! In the future we plan for Riley to receive his very own party so stay tuned for that! As always, thank you guys for your support, and if you really like our story, please consider giving us gifts! WebNovel gives you several coins for being active, and with those coins, you're able to give us gifts, both to support us as authors, and also to support us in the competition. We'd appreciate it greatly if you do! P.S. We read every single comment and review, and work hard to reply to most of them daily, so, do give us your feedback and we'd be happy to answer them!

4yr
DreamingRuby
DreamingRubyLv4

I just love it! It has the same vibe as Tha Gamer combined with The Arrow, both of which I love. There is only one thing that is frustrating. WHY. ISN'T. HE USING. THE. SKILL. POINTS?!

4yr
ssj3gohan007
ssj3gohan007Lv4

Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D This is an outstanding story I am really excited to see where it leads! :)

4yr
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