Review Detail of Achyut_Jha in My Vampire System

The story, concept, and progression are very interesting, but the writer drags the storyline for too long after chapter 1.5K or so, which really reduces his ability to keep the readers in the loop of interest. The story starts becoming monotonous, and, furthermore, a lack of strong wives of MC really reduces the scope of story development. I say wives, but he has only one partner, and I think the biggest off-putting part is a lack of harem and a weak partner whose relationship with the MC has been kept vague throughout. The writer exposes his lack of depth after 1300 chapters or so. I would not suggest the book read to someone who is a harem fan or likes being involved in a story. A lot has to be improved on part of the writer.