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Item: My Vampire System
Rating: 5

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V2mLv31yrV2m

I hope am not wasting your time . I would like to ask how should I improve on my grammar since I have started a novel too please help meeeee

My Vampire System

JKSManga

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Marx_Lv2Marx_

Look up words in ur head with meanings you don’t know. Use a thesaurus, one of the best ways

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V2mLv3V2m

The novel has been repeated in the novel selection side and it has been checked by an editor . if there are more mistakes u are free to inform me . it has the same name and the one in the fanfic selection side wont be continued. Since it has been given a rewrite

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